Thursday 19 November 2015

my metaphor poem


Posted by at
Labels: , ,

3 comments:

  1. ehthandom201523 November 2015 at 15:17

    I like how you described everything I your poem
    I like how you ended your poem by saying " meet me at the beach ".

    ReplyDelete
  2. ehthandom201523 November 2015 at 15:18

    I like how you described the sun.
    I like how you told us what the beach was and how it looked like.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Anonymous24 November 2015 at 15:41

    The sun was very well described and the umbrella to.
    I like the little starfish

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)