Thursday 5 November 2015

My similie poem

Forest


Like a fire in a forest
smoke as dark as night
struggling to get through
no way out
fire so bright

By: Sriya


Posted by at
Labels: , ,

2 comments:

  1. Mrs S5 November 2015 at 13:24

    Wow! What a lovely poem, Sriya - so visual. Your drawing matches it perfectly!
    Mrs S.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous6 November 2015 at 12:07

    Great use of similes and what a fiery yet nice picture.(nice poem :P)

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)